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首先要明確開頭段的目的,一般來說,開頭段我們需要達到兩個目標:

A. 引入主題
B. 表明觀點
◆◆引入主題◆◆

把題目中談論的核心話題引入到我們的文章中;注意:照抄原題不算字數,也會反映出考生有限的詞匯資源;應對策略:同義改寫。

方法


開門見山,直接入題
轉折對比入題


01

開門見山,直接入題


例1:


理解:海外社媒編輯部介紹項目,幫助寫手了解目標和未來的方向


分析:寫手根據自己的經歷,觀察同學關心的話題,準備選題


討論:在兩周一次的選題會上,寫手提報選題,并用3分鐘闡述選題的有趣之處


評估:群內投票,選出得票數較高的選題,寫手根據選題列大綱,編輯部一對一修改和討論


測試:寫手作品發布之后,在群內Review數據,討論優化的方向


直接入題常用句型總結:

① The issue of... is a/an controversial/sensitive/emotional one.

② The problem/question of... is not a new one.

③ It is a hot-debated issue...

④ It is quite common these days...

⑤ There is much discussion these days about...

⑥ There has long been a debate about...


例2:

People receive a lot of information from news reports presented by journalists. However, some people claim that we cannot believe the news that we are presented with. What is your opinion on the issue? In addition, what qualities do you think journalists should have?

Sample Answer:
Living in an information age, we are all too often overloaded with various news in the newspapers, on television and over the radio. But a large proportion of them proves to be forged or fabricated, such as the South China tiger scandal in 2007. So how much can we trust the news we are presented with? And what qualities should the journalists have?


例3:

The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities makes human beings less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer:
In recent years, there has been a debate about whether the use of modem technology increases or decreases people's creativity. I believe modem technology has generally allowed people to become more creative.



02

轉折對比入題


例1:

A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Discuss the reasons for this and give some proposals.

Sample Answer:
The social and economic development should have resulted in a happier and healthier life for children. However, recently increasingly more parents are concerning their children have become lazy, fat and unsociable.


表虛擬語氣的句型:

... should have... However, ...

 If..., should have...


例2:

The overuse of modern technologies in recreational activities makes human beings less creative. Do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer:
It is generally acknowledged that modern technologies in recreational activities have brought people easier and more convenient life. However, to use them too often might result in the loss of creativity belonging to human beings.


It is
“人們一般認為”:  
universally    acknowledged that...   
well     accepted that...   
widely      believed that... 
generally    maintained that... 

例3:

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

Sample Answer:

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunity for children to stay in their own home up to that age. Instead, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.


◆◆表明觀點◆◆

2 平衡性
2 傾向性

思路:
我認為       A有利有弊(平衡性)    
I tend to think that...   
It seems to me that... 
I am of the opinion that...
I would take the view that...   A有更多好處/壞處(傾向性)  

Personally, I think...
In fact, ...
As a matter of fact, ... 

表達平衡性觀點:A有利有弊    
advantages     disadvantages   
merits     demerits  
benefits       drawbacks 
strengths    weaknesses 
favorable influences    unfavorable influences  
beneficial/positive effects   harmful/detrimental/negative effects 

具體問題具體分析:
Whether we should believe ... depends on the actual situation involved...

沒有明確的答案,它明顯有利有弊:
There is no clear-cut answer to the question... There are obviously pros and cons.

表達傾向性觀點:



早點上學有更多好處。

There are more advantages to having school experience at a young age.


核技術對社會有更多的弊端而非好處。

Nuclear technology is more a curse than a blessing for society.


利大于弊

Its advantages outweigh/outnumber the disadvantages.


我同意/不同意

I'm for/against the proponents/opponents.


我同意/不同意這一觀點

I find myself in virtually complete agreement/disagreement with this opinion.


結尾段:


如果作文在開頭段沒有表明觀點,結尾段就表明自己的中心觀點即可;如果作文在開頭段已表明觀點,結尾段可重申自己觀點,并總結前文的重要分論點,也可適當提出一些針對性建議。

表示總結的關聯詞:

① In a nutshell/ In sum/ In conclusion

② To reiterate, I believe that...

③ When all the factors are examined, we may safely come to the conclusion that...

④ From what has been discussed above, we can see that (it is obvious that)...

⑤ Personally, I firmly hold that...


例1:

How important is it to maintain old buildings?

Sample Answer:

As we have discussed, old buildings are part of a country's history and are valuable in many ways. We should plan well and be wise to see such values. At the same time, we should also do our best to find solutions to make the old and the new coexist in harmony.


例2:

Some people believe that TV plays an important role in our daily life.What is your opinion on this?

Sample Answer:

In conclusion, describing the media in such simple terms as good or bad is inappropriate. They are genuine sources of entertainment and information but their content requires careful monitoring to make sure it is not harmful to society.


例3:

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.Do you agree or disagree?

Sample Answer:
I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world.


請大家一定要重視開頭和結尾段的寫作??脊僭诟拇蠹易魑牡臅r候,并不會很仔細地去關注到每一個單詞,而是挑重點去改。

那這個“重點”具體指什么呢?其實就是我們文章的開頭和結尾段,以及主體段部分的Topic Sentence。

如果這些地方寫得非常精彩的話,是非常加分的。因此仔細琢磨上面介紹的幾種寫法,認真練習,以達到最大的進步!


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